Safe House Rewrite

As I mentioned in a previous post, my one act stage play, Safe House, has been doing well in contests, but remains a bridesmaid. The Pittsburgh critiques were mailed to me. One judge felt Safe House was ready to walk down the aisle (I was excited to hear that!), two judges didn't. I decided to concentrate on what the two naysayers had to say. I totally agree with their assessment! and have rewritten the play with their criticisms in mind. Also, I added one new character and simplified the plot line. So, I will be sending Safe House out soon to other theaters. We'll see.